Re: Let's Be Terrible - BDSM in fic

Date: 2015-08-07 04:49 pm (UTC)

“Consensually, Bert touched Ernie on the wrist. “Do you consent to having your wrist touched harder,” he said (in a healthy and boundary-respectful way).

“Yes,” said Ernie. “It is good to demonstrate consent, because consent is important. Consent, consent, consent.”

They then BDSMed, in a rather lacklustre and passionless manner which left the reader wondering who was getting off on this, since the characters didn't seem to be and the writer certainly wasn't. Afterwards, Bert held Ernie and gently soothed him, as that is what Proper Doms do and what Proper Subs want. Nobody involved in this has heard of topdrop.

And it was all a jolly good consensual time.”

Nonny response was sharply divided between “SO HOT” and concern over the OP's failure to mention that Bert and Ernie were being Safe and Sane.