Re: John C. Wright made boom-boom on his keyboard again.
Date: 2014-07-18 02:57 pm (UTC)
(Anonymous)
If you see a sunset clothed in scarlet like a king descending to his empurpled pyre…
In that discussion last week of 'what is purple prose', so many nonnies just didn't get. This guy, he gets it! Over the top simile+colorful adjective. Oh, and Mr. Write - what you're attempting to describe (badly) is not art, it's nature.
…empurpled (That word, it tasks me!)
I could feel the burning heat of his proud empurpled member, wreathed in scarlet and gold like an angel's hair, paused, trembling at the pulsing postern entrance to my body.
“Are you certain?” he whispered.
“Fuck me,” I cried. “Fuck me hard Manding… (Oops!) Make me a man, John Write! Make me your man!”